The first story i read was Brads story on dances
1. The story had a good amount of detail everywhere it was needed.
2. The author does a good job involving the reader and himself in the story.
3. The scene of the author asking his girlfriend to prom is in the story.
4. It was all great.
The second story i read was Peters story on Crohns disease
1. great detail the whole way through
2. puts the issue in perspective for the reader
3. he tells about a students journey with the disease
4. the amount of info was just right.
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